You should spend about 40 minutes on this question. Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Few individuals claim that it is prohibited to keep creatures in

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,

for instance

in zoos. But, many pupils believe that it is beneficial because it

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us from

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animals. The importance of the

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was always debatable

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now become more controversial. In my, opinion the position of creatures appears to be more rational. In

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both

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and negative impact of

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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

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argument but the paramount point is that

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as tiger, lion,

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are non-vegetarian and it is

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to humans. Another pivotal

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of

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that they are powerful and massive, maybe

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diminishing the property and buildings. Needless to say

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merits stand in

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good stead.

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arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

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issue.

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someone in a cage and

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a roof due to

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that freedom is

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right.

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the caretaker are not protected the creatures and they do not give

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volume of food.

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, it is apparent why many are against

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affair.

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the survey conducted by the prestigious new paper the Hindustan Times revealed that most of the

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are suffering from depression and

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. According to

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aforementioned above, one can reach

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conclusion that the benefits of animals in captivity are instrumental indeed.

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potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.