Many people believe that public facilities (e.g. zoos, museums, parks)should be free. Other people think that you should pay to use these facilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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, zoos, and,

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should be

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other pupils

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that it is not appropriate we should spend money on these kinds of things. The importance of public facilities was always debatable and has now become more controversial. Few claim that it is beneficial. Others reject

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notion. In my, opinion the position of public facilities appears to be more rational. In

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essay we will

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trend and

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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are countless reasons which will

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explain

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argument but the most alarming fact is that poor nations

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as India, China, Africa, and, Nepal population have not much wealth to

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these kinds of

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. Another pivotal aspect of

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argument is that parks and

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of our life. It

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knowledge about fitness and education. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead.

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, there are some pitfalls that negate

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arguments which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

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issue.

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, the bullet point is that the government spending most of the money on

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contributed

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to

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of

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in the zoo, carnal are starving and pressure on the higher authorities increased rapidly. So, if we spend our valuable money on them it is

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thing.

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,

museums

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provided

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volume of wisdom and maintenance is a requirement of

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.

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, we will

spending

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dollars on

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.

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, parks have workers who

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take

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responsibility

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park

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the park

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and they need

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fulfill

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life demands . Perhaps, we should

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pay

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the park. According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach

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conclusion that

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of public properties are instrumental indeed.

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,

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potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.