Some people argue capital punishment is a brutal decision and should be abolished. Do you agree or disagree?

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into two groups of opinion about the death sentence:
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part
believe
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that is
an extreme choice and wants
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this
practice, while another agrees with it. In my
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judical
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murder is wrong, so I disagree for different reasons that I am going to explain in
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essay. Is important to think that,
although
the criminal could deserve
this
extreme type of punishment because of his barbaric crime,
this
sentence is
irreversable
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irreversible
. Indeed in the
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hypothetical
case for which the defendant was stuck,
hence
he was innocent, is impossible to get back and
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him free
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because
there is
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cure for death.
Furthermore
,
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to the social impact of execution is clear
that is
so bad. A lot of statistics
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that in the countries where
this
type of judgment is used the general level of violence is very high.
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given by the
governament
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government
, in fact, killing the criminal literally means
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like him and
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the message that
this
practice is right. In my opinion, a State should promote forgiveness,
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and
second
opportunity while
this
behaviour looks like revenge. To summarise,
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the life of someone is always wrong even if we are talking about the worst criminal ever.
Nonetheless
, the punishment must still be extremely hard with a lot of hours of work, not-socialysing, bad food and
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benefits to help the crime subject to understand his
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tarrible actions and with the possibility of
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back in case he was not gultie and given a good example to the population.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • capital punishment
  • deterrent
  • irreversible
  • wrongful conviction
  • moral implications
  • life imprisonment
  • societal impact
  • abolition
  • justice system
  • rehabilitation
  • ethical considerations
  • humanitarian perspectives
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