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Fast food is becoming a part of people's daily life everwhere, and this has had negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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The chart illustrates the figures for accidents per 100,000,000 commuters by transport method in 2002. Overall, it is clear from the given data that the highest
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 could be observed in the Demand Response category, whereas the lowest
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 could be seen in the Commuter
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 with 20
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 section with 51 and 35 respectively. In the
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 jumped and it reached 76 and 39 in the Light
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 of transportation had the same
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 with 76 each.
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 in comparison with the Light
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. In the Demand Response section, there was a significant increase. The
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ubiquitous
  • Convenience
  • Nutrition
  • Obesity epidemic
  • Lifestyle diseases
  • Processed foods
  • Caloric intake
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Health implications
  • Dietary patterns
  • Globalization of diet
  • Health-conscious
  • Regulatory measures
  • Consumer behavior
  • Marketing strategies
  • Junk food
  • Preventive healthcare
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