Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays,
significant
number of Change the article
a significant
the significant
well educated
and qualified people for professions have to complete their training while others think that everyone has the freedom to choose where the experts Add a hyphen
well-educated
work
according to their desire.
On the one hand, most of
developing Change preposition
apply
countries
impose some rules and regulations to keep the healthcare providers and engineers to give the skills in rural areas. For an instance, In Australia, majority
of medical service providers must train in remote areas, if they need to complete their academic studies. Correct article usage
the majority
Moreover
, these skillful
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skilful
workfoce's
main duty is to give their full efforts to develop their Correct your spelling
workforce's
workforce
countries
as a
repayment for giving free education. Not only that but Remove the article
apply
also
these youngsters have energy and enthusiasm to cover the goals which are benifits
to reach and achieve Correct your spelling
benefits
economical
growth.
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economic
On the other hand
,every employees
need the freedom to go through their carrier according to their dream destination. Most Change to a singular noun
employee
of
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apply
people
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the people
work
hard to go beyond their sea limites
to take the international experience of working in Correct your spelling
limits
the
western Correct article usage
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countries
as the high facilities that were given by developed countries
. Through
it has drawbacks, it Correct word choice
Though
fulfills
personal objectives. To conclude, if Change the spelling
fulfils
inteligant
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intelligent
workfocres
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workforces
work
in motherland
, it is productive to hit the economic task. Add an article
the motherland
However
, if they work
abroad, they will send the foreign capitals
.Fix the agreement mistake
capital
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite