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7. > How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answers.

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Nowadays, watching some films, unconsciously, influences our ways of
life
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. As everything in
life
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 is like a coin that has two different sides, people must think before jumping to the conclusion that what we see on TV is true. It is shown in movies, during these
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, that perfection could be reached and that being rich means obtaining happiness.
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 with, we always must keep in mind that the people behind the screen are actors,
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 their job consists of pretending to be someone else almost all the time. So what we watch is almost never true, but constructed by someone else. For
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 we can’t think to reach the perfection
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 shown in the movies.
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, the actors themselves in the real
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 do have not the perfect
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 of the characters who interpret.
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, the ideals presented are usually similar in all the tv series : being rich means having a good
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.
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 idea is dangerous for the young, because they may understand that without money it is impossible to be satisfied in a lifetime. Obviously,
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 not true, but it is an oversimplified way to see
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, which is more complex because there are several aspects that allow us to be eager. In conclusion, it is impossible not to be influenced by some ideals and dream about a serene and perfect
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 that our favourite characters have, but we always have to face the reality and recognize it, even if continuous advertising wants to give us some models to follow.
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