In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the current digitalized era, technological advancement has been promoted
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a different level. It is argued that one of the greatest innovations nowadays is
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where human is only
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be passengers inside. For sure, there is
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and downturn
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innovation from my perspective. One of the upsides is
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in
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. Many
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depend on technological investment.
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, Tesla is one of the biggest innovators and producers of
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the driverless
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car
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. The company is registered
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stock exchange that has magnetized investors from around the World.
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has created a positive impact
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economy.
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, we can see from
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that are a lot of road accidents
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by
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a reckless
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. In
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case, when
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by
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,
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reduces
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possibility of road accidents.
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, there are some drawbacks regarding
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driverless
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which due to the price of
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. To release these kinds of
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products, there must be different costs for innovation and production. For sure,
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will be pushed
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the customer
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customer
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customers
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that
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tend to be higher
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to
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that require
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the driver
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driver
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to operate.
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, rules and regulations should be set by the government. In some countries, there are strict legal requirements related to transportation. Government should consider the prohibition of
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to balance between country’s readiness
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needs
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and wants of
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. In conclusion, whether
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vehicles
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have more advantages or disadvantages is a question to be analyzed and answered carefully. Each individual should carefully set the importance
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the best outcome.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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