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Some people today have argued that countries should interfere less in the affairs of other nations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years there are a lot of debates
whether
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countries
 should meddle in the politics of others. Personally, I tend to agree with
this
 position for a number of reasons that will be discussed
further
 in
this
 essay. The main reason why I support
this
 view is the formal definition of the
country
.
This
 is a sovereign entity with its own laws, so other
countries
 have to respect
sovereignty
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, which means not interfering in the
country
's affairs.
Thus
, interference by one
country
 in the politics of another may be seen by the international community as a non-acceptance of the status of sovereignty. There are quite a number of examples from history
,
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 when one
country
 interfered in
the
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another and it ended and it ended up as a war criminal act.
Moreover
, nations have a huge amount of differences, so only their governments know how
it
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they
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 should conduct business. Even when other
countries
 want to help, rather than hinder, it can be a disservice because of
lack
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 of understanding
the
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 specific features. Every
country
 has its own history, geographic characteristics, culture, social norms and values.
Therefore
 fruitful decisions for one nation can be very destructive for another.
For example
, the result of aid to poor
countries
 by developed
countries
 can be described as painful. The ideas that were invented in the
first
 world
countries
 are only suitable for its conditions, for the
third
 world these solutions are destructive. Taking all the evidence into consideration, I believe that every
country
 has to mind its own affairs and not those of others. Some “helping” can be a dangerous intention to destroy another nation, while others can be irrelevant because of differences between the
countries
.
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