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people's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than on any other factor . to what extend do you agree or disagree

#people #habits #age #group #factor
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It is argued that
people
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's shopping habits are more influenced by their
age
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 than by any other factor.I completely agree with
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 viewpoint because
people
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's shipping methods and necessities can vary depending on their
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 group. On the one hand, shopping habits have changed dramatically over the past few decades due to the development of technology and globalization. Because the new generation spends more time on the internet and is more familiar with the eCommerce app on mobile devices, online shopping has become
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 popular among the young generation.Even though online shopping is convenient, many elderly
people
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 prefer to shop in person because they may dislike using an electronic device.
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, many older
people
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 are more social, so they would like to communicate face-to-face when purchasing the item, which gives them a chance to socialize with other
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.
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,
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's needs and frequency of shopping can be changed according to their
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 group.
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teenager is likely to enjoy frequent shopping because the market is constantly updated with new items, particularly electronic devices
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 and because teens spend a lot of money on smart devices
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 as mobile phones and laptop computers.
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, older
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 spend money on household items
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 as washing machines and refrigerators.  
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,
people
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's shopping habits vary by
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 group due to the influence of technology and the nature of their needs.
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