In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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desire to find the background and
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information about their living place. I will argue, the benefits of knowing the history of their accommodations and the causing factors for growing enthusiasm for that.
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people
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world, use many technical
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to identify
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information about apartments, specifically, everyone can easily access
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the Internet and search
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about the living area.
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, residents can be identified from that.
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interest
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ancient incidents which happened
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may be given high demand or less attraction. For an instance, if there was a murder happening in the building where you are going to choose as your home definitely you think twice before purchasing it.
On the other hand
, if the house was owned by a famous person, the demand and the value of the accommodation increase rapidly.
However
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and householders try to emphasise
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as
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original, so
people
tried out to solve
such
problems by referring
archaeological
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andliterary
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and literary
sources to clarify the truth.
Nevertheless
, wealthy
personso
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persons
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always try to maintain their reputation by picking up homes where the
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merchants lived in Europe. Not only that but
also
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of spending time in
a historical, valuable palaces
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a historical, valuable palace
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is a dream of some millionaires. To sum put, finding
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andthe
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background of your living place is
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thing before investing
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it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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