You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear neighbours, I hope you will accept my sincere apologies for that on my birthday was playing

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loud melody.

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of all, I am terribly sorry to say that on

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day I am not able to do it because I can not turn down the tune because I and my friends always celebrate our birthdays together .

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,we go to each other homes and play pieces every birthday.And

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thing become our habit . That ish why we were playing loud soul. You know that not every birthday is complete without singing. I have to say that on

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day we had the tune very loud . I terribly regret that thing . I did not know that noise can affect your health and that you should consult a doctor. I must say sorry again for

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. I promise I won't do it again and I will try not to do anything to hurt you . Please accept my apologies. Yours sincerely, ........... Hamrayev Munisa

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, Explain that you would like to apply for the job Give some details of any relevant experience that you have Specify the date and times that would suit you.

Some people say that all popular TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues.

📝 TASK 2: More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.