You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear neighbours, I hope you will accept my sincere apologies for that on my birthday was playing

the

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loud melody.

First

of all, I am terribly sorry to say that on

this

day I am not able to do it because I can not turn down the tune because I and my friends always celebrate our birthdays together .

Also

,we go to each other homes and play pieces every birthday.And

this

thing become our habit . That ish why we were playing loud soul. You know that not every birthday is complete without singing. I have to say that on

this

day we had the tune very loud . I terribly regret that thing . I did not know that noise can affect your health and that you should consult a doctor. I must say sorry again for

this

. I promise I won't do it again and I will try not to do anything to hurt you . Please accept my apologies. Yours sincerely, ........... Hamrayev Munisa

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

167 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

In the few decades, there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media should have no right to privacy. To what extent do you agree?

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some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people believe that the world’s most urgent problems can only be solved by international collaboration. Do you agree or disagree?