In theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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portray
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educational
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board of India to promote their application.
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order to remain on top or in business, they often promote their product.
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increasing .
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brands often claim
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in the country or claim
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brands overspend on marketing, and they mind wash their users by
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Competition
  • Consumer demand
  • Novelty
  • Innovation
  • Progress
  • Differentiation
  • Attract
  • Generate
  • Interest
  • Positive aspect
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  • Emphasize
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