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In theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In the modern era of globalization, many
companies
potray
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portray
that
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their
product
is
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as
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 the latest. There are several reasons to do
this
, and it is not beneficial to do so. Both the reason and my opinion are discussed
further
. Discussing the pessimistic influence of the presence of the
companies
 , the foremost one is that a brand wants to increase
their
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 annual revenue.
Thus
, they spend a huge amount of money to promote. A good illustration is that
,
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 educational
companies
 like BYJUS had made a contract with
cricket
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 board of India to promote their application.
In addition
 to
this
, there is
a
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cut-throat competition in the market,
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 order to remain on top or in business, they often promote their
product
.
Furthermore
,
falsely
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 claims by
companies
 are increasing .
For instance
, Toothpaste brands often claim themselves as
a
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 number one toothpaste brand or claim themselves as dentist
recomended
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recommend
, which is not true.
Moreover
, sometimes brands overspend on marketing, and they
mind wash
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its
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their
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 users by promoting the
product
, and often
sale
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its
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their
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product
 at a loss in order to acquire new users.
For example
,
new
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a new
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 business spent millions in marketing and
then
file
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files
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 for a bankruptcy
Thus
, to conclude, it can be
finally
 commented that there are many dismissive on business promote . The reasons and the merits of doing so prove that it would be both passion and job satisfaction for the seeker to change their position.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Competition
  • Consumer demand
  • Novelty
  • Innovation
  • Progress
  • Differentiation
  • Attract
  • Generate
  • Interest
  • Positive aspect
  • Negative aspect
  • Emphasize
  • Balancing
  • Quality
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