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Tourism has emerged as one of the biggest industries of this decade, but its disadvantages cannot be overlooked. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#tourism #industries #decade
Needless to say, the rising number of tourists around the world and it's creating
a new experiences
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 for people
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for
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adventure folks due to the low cost of flights.
However
,
tourism
 has become controversial in recent years. From my perspective, the formal statement appears to be more rational.
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this
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this
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 adequate evidence to obtainable the substantiated reasons. The
top notch
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 concrete reason is
tourism
 is the backbone of many countries.
For instance
, Singapore and Switzerland countries
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 on
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tourism
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better infrastructure.
Moreover
, exploring a new place which
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 tourists to learn about the culture and history in more depth than the text of the paper.
In addition
, the demand
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 tourists creates an immense number of job opportunities for the locals, which contributes to a more stable and harmonic society.
Hence
, it's apparent why many of
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 people
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 favour of
this
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.
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,
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the thrones of the area cannot be
negelected
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neglected
. The most worrying aspect is that excessive
amout
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amount
amounts
 of toxic gases in the atmosphere and
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plastic material threats to
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enviroment
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environment
 by travelling
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new place.
Furthermore
, foreign people are not giving respect to other
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 places. To probe more deeply, visiting
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the temple by sleeper and many more. In recapitulation, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting that
tourism
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create
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 a new experience and tremendous benefits to society.
Therefore
, the drawback cannot be overlooked.
Consequently
, I firmly agree with the given statement.
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