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When you learn a foreign language all four skills (listening, reading, speaking,writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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People
 often said that to learn a foreign
language
 all four
skills
such
 as listening, reading, writing and speaking are equally obbligato, in my opinion, I completely agree with
this
 parlance and provide my supporting examples in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, one of the obvious reasons for
this
 argument is the requirement of using all
skills
,
for instance
, when we want to make some foreign friends we are required to
use
 these
skills
, we may
use
 writing to send a message or e-mail;
use
 listening and speaking to have
convesation
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conversation
conversations
 with friends.
Also
for
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when we need to read a book or magazine, we need to possess
the
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reading skill.
Secondly
, another reason is studying abroad, it has always been with the development of the times, most
people
aroud
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around
 the world are decided to travel to another country to study or work. It means as a student or worker
have
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 to face the situation to learn all these
skills
 in a foreign
language
. Conspicuous English is the most common foreign
language
 that
people
 learn
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 because developed nations
such
 as Canada,
United
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 States,
United
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 Kingdom, etcetera
are
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all
use
 English.
As a result
, there are numerous reasons to explain why are they equally important as
a
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 individual or society. In conclusion, I extremely consider that all four
skills
 of
toreign
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foreign
language
 should be popularized. They
working
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 together and
people
 can not abandon them at once.
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