You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

Dear Jennifer, It's been so long since we were in touch but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we spent together

last

year. I am glad to invite you to my son's

first

birthday party on February 16, 2023. we are decided to hold

this

party at my parent's home in Cologne, which is very beautiful and accessible to most of our friends. I would be happy if you come two days earlier and stay with me. The home is near the Cologne cathedral and within walking distance from the railway station. I will text you the exact location. Don't worry about your accommodation, I have three vacant bedrooms, you can choose the one you like. Cologne is a beautiful city and a lot to see in

this

city, if you can stay longer,we can discuss with the group and plan something exciting. I can't wait to see you! With love Joy

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

152 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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