Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. what could be the disadvantages of being self employed?
In the modern world, starting own business is preferable to a graduate than doing a private job in a corporate sector. Like all other professional activities,
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also
has some pros and cons. In the essay, I will explain some drawbacks of being self-operated.
To start with, most of the population chooses to work for the establishment of their industry. They don't like to give their actions to a private organization. In developing countries, there is a shortage of job opportunities that increases the number of jobless graduates in the states producing a burden on society. Due to the development of new technologies and the internet, the public create an interest in online businesses and free lanching. Linking Words
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as Amazon, and Ali express are more popular nowadays. Linking Words
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, YouTube and Facebook blogging is very much popular in the current situation.
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these self-doing activities are reduced the crisis of the job market, it's a source of earning money. Linking Words
furthermore
, Self-efficacy and confidence Linking Words
also
build up through individual business development. There are some disadvantages of self-business. Linking Words
For example
, without a stable salary, it will be hard to plan the future with certainty. To some extent, it may be costly to start a new business and there will always be a risk of failure, especially during the initial few months. So, before deciding to be self-employed, I think it is better to consider the risks Linking Words
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In conclusion, self-employed workers start their own companies to avoid more stress or pressures from people around them at the workplace Linking Words
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, they will have to take challenges to learn better financial management skills into account before starting a new company.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...