Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number
people
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claim that a state should
straive
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strive
to produce all the
food
for feeding its society and try to reduce
amount
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the amount
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of
import
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imports
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as much as possible, while I completely disagree with
this
opinion. Due to the fact that what I believe is
import
one
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is one
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of the most important
sources
of way to supply
food
.
To begin
with, trying to grow up all the grains and bring up different
food
resources may not be possible for every
nations
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nation
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which
have
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has
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lived
various
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in various
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parts
of the
world
. To illustrate, there are some countries
can
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that can
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not carry out agrarian activities like Finland and Norway. It is known that these provinces are
asumed
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assumed
the coldest
ares
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areas
area
of
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in
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the
world
.
Therefore
, no one can deny that due to
lack
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the lack
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of adequate land and
inappropreate
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inappropriate
weather conditions to do agricultural activities, they ought to purchase
food
to feed
thier
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their
citizens.
Hence
, if we consider
inabilities
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the inabilities
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of some countries which suffer from
vary
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the vary
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of difficulties, we
con not
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cannot
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evaluate
import
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imports
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as
drawback
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a drawback
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.
On the other hand
, there are
also
many
parts
which can provide nutrition
sources
for their communities
such
as
mediterrian
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Mediterranean
provinces.
For example
, İtaly, Greece and Turkey are able to grow up the grain which they need and bring up
different
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a different
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type
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types
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of animals to eat. Not only do these countries ensure
sufficent
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sufficient
sources
to feed their people, but
also
can export some of their products. In fact, these states
shoul
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should
try to produce all of their needs, because
this
possession can consider an advantage for holding
essential
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an essential
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position to provide
food
sources
other
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in other
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parts
of the
world
. Yet, it can be said just limited
ereas
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areas
which
contitutes
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constitutes
a
litte
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little
part of the earth. If
the
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apply
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all
parts
of the
world
had ensured their
food
sources
, it would be possible to evaluate
they
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their
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equal conditions.
However
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it is not. To sum up,
although
some people believe that every country should produce all the
food
for its community and
import
should
be hold
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be held
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at
minimum
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a minimum
the minimum
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level, I am not convinced truth of
this
opinion. It
seem
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to me that
import
one
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is one
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of the most important aspects of supplying nutrition to society
,
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apply
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because many nations do not have
capabilities
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the capabilities
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to ensure their needs in terms of
food
.
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