Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number of people claim that a state should
straive
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strive
to produce all the
food
for feeding its society and try to reduce
amount
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of
import
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as much as possible, while I completely disagree with
this
opinion. Due to the fact that what I believe is
import
one
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of the most important
sources
of way to supply
food
.
To begin
with, trying to grow up all the grains and bring up different
food
resources may not be possible for every nation which has lived in various parts of the world. To illustrate, there are some countries
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not carry out agrarian activities like Finland and Norway. It is known that these provinces are assumed the coldest areas of the world.
Therefore
, no one can deny that due to the lack of adequate land and inappropriate weather conditions to do agricultural activities, they ought to purchase
food
to feed their citizens.
On the other hand
, there are
also
many parts which can provide nutrition
sources
for their communities
such
as
mediterrian
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Mediterranean
provinces.
For example
, İtaly, Greece and Turkey are able to grow up the grain which they need and bring up different types of animals to eat. Not only do these countries ensure sufficient
sources
to feed their people, but
also
can export some of their products. Yet, it can be said just limited areas
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constitutes
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a little part of the earth. If all parts of the world had ensured their
food
sources
, it would be possible to evaluate
they
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equal conditions,
however
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it is not. To sum up,
although
some people believe that every country should produce all the
food
for its community and
import
should be held at
minimum
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a minimum
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level, I am not convinced truth of
this
opinion. It seems to me that
import
is one of the most important aspects of supplying nutrition to society
,
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because many nations do not have the capabilities to ensure their needs in terms of
food
.
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