Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an international organizational rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays ,
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the environment
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environment
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environmental
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issue is getting worse all around the
world
. Some people think that
this
issued
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issue
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is sloved
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sloved
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solved
loved
by an international organisation rather than
national
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the national
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or state
government
. I strongly disagree with
this
point of view because every nation
suffer
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suffers
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in
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from
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different sort of
environment
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environmental
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problems
.
Therefore
, I will give my explanation in the ensuing paragraphs. On the one hand, the
government
know the environmental
problems
of their nation. They can easily recognize and
sloved
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solved
solve
. Some nature issues depend on
climate
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the climate
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conditions of states or
city
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cities
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.
For example
, in
india
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India
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, the northern side has located around
mountain
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a mountain
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rang
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range
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. So, in that part melting ice ,
land slides
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landslides
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,
deforestation
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and deforestation
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problem occurs.
Therefore
, the northern
government
are
awer
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aware
these situations and they tackle
easily
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them easily
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.
Moreover
, all
countries
suffered
sort
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a sort
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of nature
problems
. The national
government
define solution
on
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to
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types of
problems
which some developing
countries
can not follow their decisions.
For instance
,
the
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apply
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new
zealand
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Zealand
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suffered
extreme
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an extreme
the extreme
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level
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levels
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of air pollution. So, the New Zealand
government
promote public transportation
such
as bus,
electrical
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and electrical
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train than
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a motor
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motor cycle
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motorcycle
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or personal vehicles.
As a result
,
the
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apply
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carbon dioxide emission has
been
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decreased.
However
,
the
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developing
countries
as
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such as
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a
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apply
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India, with different road
network
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networks
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and traffic volumes . So , it is not
worthy
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worth
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to
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of
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such
innovation.
On the other hand
,
an
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apply
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environmental
problems
such
as
green house
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greenhouse
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effects, global warming, carbon dioxide emission and climate
changes
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change
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. There are serious
problems
around the
world
. The international organization and national community should
colobration
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collaboration
colouration
and
sloved
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solved
loved
together .
In addition
, the
world
protect
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protects
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environment organization plays a vital role to protect the
world
. Every year all nation part in
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a committee
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committee
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committees
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and make
decision
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decisions
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mutually to save the earth. In conclusion ,
although
every
countries
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country
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know
their
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its
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own environmental conditions. So, it is
more
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a more
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precise way to reduce these
problems
if they are dealt
at
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with
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nationally.
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