Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Home
cooking has been replaced by eating out due to the modern lifestyle that
people are busy and do not have to cook. I agree to the extent that buying fast Change preposition
in that
food
is more convenient and less stressful. In this
essay, my opinions will be given.
Obviously, fast food
has played a vital role in urban lifestyle because of long working hours. Home
cook
has become another burden Wrong verb form
cooking
especially
for housewives after their office hours. As so eating out or Add the comma(s)
,especially
food
delivery are greater choices as it is time-saving by paying a little extra money to fill the food
into the stomach. According to Euromonitor Research in 2020, it stated that people in big cities such
as Tokyo, Bangkok, and Seoul tend to eat out more often than five years ago. Moreover
, they spend less and less time eating as they are rushing for some errands afterwards. Furthermore
, the technology disrupted by food
delivery services, for instance
, Grab, Lineman, and Uber, have even made the residents' life
easier. They can even order the meal via an app and schedule the delivery time at Replace the word
lives
home
at the same time as they arrive.
However
, home
cooking can cause a
stress. Self-cooking is significantly better than fast Remove the article
apply
food
in many aspects. To illustrate this
point, everyone will only choose the best, fresh, healthy and organic, ingredients that are good for health and prepare them properly. Unlike the eating-out situation where the restaurant owners only pay attention to quantity over quality for financial profit. Cooking is more paying attention to details as it has been said 'You Are What You Eat'. This
statement has well reflected that people only intake the good things to their body.
In conclusion, though fast food
can release the
stress for modern Correct article usage
apply
residences
, it is good for health in long term due to Replace the word
residents
the
proper cooking. We cannot prevent them from eating out but at least we Correct article usage
apply
cabn
suggest Correct your spelling
can
Change preposition
to them
them
Correct pronoun usage
they
to
have a good balance between eating out and Fix the infinitive
apply
home
cooking.Submitted by minichariie on
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