In the future, self-driving cars will replace human drivers. Is this a positive or negative development?

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car
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driving is going to change in the
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self-driving
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. it is argued
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it safer than driving your own
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by yourself or just relying on
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computer intelligence.
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me
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tend to support self-driving
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see it much safer. Some people feel that they will not be comfortable if they
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their
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, and the idea of depending on the
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products and
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technology to do the job
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of them is not a good idea. They see that the
cars
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not like
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where
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it
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always flays in specific imaginary line and special
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level, whereas
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driven in traffic area and some sudden incidence might happen while driving. The other thought
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agree with and
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see
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as a positive improvement
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self-driving
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will have
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a lower
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risk
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accident
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than human
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. Technologies worldwide are growing and we can see that many tasks are done with very low error
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by
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kind of technology.
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in some recent and modern
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cars
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there is
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mode and some other modes which are done by the
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without
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human intervention and it is done perfectly by the machine,
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like medicine we see
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alot
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a lot
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of respiratory support and neurological surgeries.
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in my opinion
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self-driving
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will succeed as
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will keep many legal features like keeping
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distance
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the other
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to help avoid any sudden issue
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happen like some turn his
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to your
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or
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suddenly,
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maintaining legal speed in the road will help to reduce the accidents. In conclusion, self-driving
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is a huge subject,
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there is already a company
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self driving
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self-driving
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vehicles which
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Tessla,
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still believe that other companies will produce self-driving
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in near future and all people will don’t have to drive anymore, they will just enjoy the road without fearing from accidents or paying attention to the other
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. I strongly believe as
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type of
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cars
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spread and
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being
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used by all individual there will be
very
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low rate of accidents.
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