spite of the adavances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this cause? What can be done about this problem?
today, all of us especially the
farmer
and the government are trying to provide human food
stock
. in this
era, technology has grew
faster, Change the verb form
grown
this
made some changes in agriculture
sector more Correct article usage
the agriculture
advance
. Wrong verb form
advanced
on the other hand
, there are several factors that made this
program did not filled
.
as we know, today we have climate Change the verb form
fill
issue
that Fix the agreement mistake
issues
very
dangerous. Add a missing verb
are very
moreover
, this
issue has an
negative impact Change the article
a
in
farming. the Change preposition
on
farmer
can not predict the weather exactly, as
a Correct word choice
and as
result
some Add the comma(s)
,result
farmer
get Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
failure
crops. Replace the word
failed
furthermore
, human populations have increased that not balancing with food
stock
. this
is made in some country
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
such
as Africa, India, and China has a problem with their community like hungry people.
there are two ways to solve this
problem. firstly
, as a community
we must Add a comma
,community
changing
our lifestyle to Change the verb form
change
be changing
green
lifestyle Correct article usage
a green
such
as stopping use
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the use
private
transportation, Change preposition
of private
use
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using
reusable
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a reusable
bag
, and no more organic waste. Fix the agreement mistake
bags
this
way can give a big possitive
impact Correct your spelling
positive
to
our environment. reducing the number of global warming can giveChange preposition
on
a
chance for the Correct pronoun usage
us a
farmer
to planting
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plant
a
plant that suit Correct article usage
apply
to
the climate. Change preposition
apply
secondly
, another way is diversification
our Replace the word
diversifying
food
. diversification is
Change the verb form
is changing
change
our top food
with another types
, Replace the adjective
another type
other types
for example
in Indonesia rice is the bigger consumtion
, people in Correct your spelling
consumption
Indoneisa
can Correct your spelling
Indonesia
change
the rice to arrowroot that has Change the article
the same
same
level of Correct your spelling
some
teh
Correct your spelling
the
carbohidrat
with Correct your spelling
carbohydrate
carbohydrates
lowest
fat that has Change the article
the lowest
good
impact Correct article usage
a good
to
the body. and Change preposition
on
then
, diversification can enough the food
stock
and if used by all the country
in the world can cut the hunger problem
in conclusion, not Fix the agreement mistake
countries
balanced
the human population with the Wrong verb form
balancing
food
stock
in the field make hunger issue increased
. Wrong verb form
increase
this
is an effect from
Change preposition
of
the
climate Correct article usage
apply
change
. global warming can solved
by Change the verb form
be solved
solve
change
our attitude in Change the verb form
changing
reduce
the number of gas Change the verb form
reducing
emmission
. Correct your spelling
emission
emissions
besides
that, applied diverisification
can visualization the zero hungerCorrect your spelling
diversification
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