People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for instance, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? Give specific reasons to support your answer

Graduated
people
from different colleges and
universities
all over the world are supposed to have high-level careers, to be more acknowledged and be more experienced. To some extent, it might be true but we cannot expand it to all individuals.
This
essay will take a look at
this
notion and argue that it might not proper to be a widespread view. Nowadays, due to the frantic pace of life with the existence of novel technologies covering our routines, in developing
countries
, the young plan for their whole lives based on their attendance at
universities
particularly, in some limited major fields. They have been impressed with
this
idea
as a result
of what they have been taught in their childhood. Children are being brought up by the thought that if they don't graduate from a university they would not find a proper job.
This
also
changes into a competition between them and their friends.
Furthermore
, most of the time it is not a healthy one. In developing
countries
government needs experienced
people
to start up new businesses or be recruited in different governmental offices to lead the nation to improvement.
This
is less common in developed
countries
as they respect their
people
's independence in making decisions and believe in them to thrive on their own. It's
also
combined with using
third
-world
countries
' human resources. In these
countries
, the young generation decides to attend colleges and
universities
at different levels based on their intentional plan, not by government or family force. being graduated from even prestigious
universities
does not assure
people
's future in a job with a large amount of salary or respect in society. In conclusion, after
this
essay manifested the above-mentioned points it should be iterated that the amount of those under 18 students who choose to attend colleges in developed
countries
is much less than those who live in developing ones.
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