Some people today have argued that countries should interfere less in the affairs of other nations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, many
countries
are having a hand in other ones' politics and economy, while some people believe that, should not interfere in others' business and affairs. I absolutely agree with
this
notion and I discussed two of my reasons in
this
essay.
To begin
with, having a hand in another
country
’s actions can bring political problems with it, especially when they do not have a friendly relationship with each other.
Therefore
, one
country
can use
this
as a reason to attack the other and start a war.
For example
,
country
A does not like
country
B and is looking for a reason to start the war, in the meantime,
country
B is trying to have a hand in
country
A's activities, while the other side does not enjoy
this
activity,
as a result
, they bring the military to deal with each other.
Thus
, interference in other
countries
' zones can be used as a reason to start the war.
Secondly
, if one
country
let others research and interfere in its political activities,
this
will make its information and data dangerous because other
countries
can use
this
as a hole which by knowing
this
can ruin that
country
's economy.
For example
,
country
A is selling oil to Europe and it is its major money resource, while if
country
B interferes in
country
A affairs can find how much is the price for that product and starts to negotiate with Europeans for a better price,
as a result
,
this
can hurt
country
's economy. To conclude, groups of people believe that each
country
should only be informed and do actions for itself, not interfere with the other
countries
and I believe
this
is the right form.
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