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Some people today have argued that countries should interfere less in the affairs of other nations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today’s world, many
countries
 are having a hand in other ones' politics and economy, while some people believe that, should not interfere in others' business and affairs. I absolutely agree with
this
 notion and I discussed two of my reasons in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, having a hand in another
country
’s actions can bring political problems with it, especially when they do not have a friendly relationship with each other.
Therefore
, one
country
 can use
this
 as a reason to attack the other and start a war.
For example
,
country
 A does not like
country
 B and is looking for a reason to start the war, in the meantime,
country
 B is trying to have a hand in
country
 A's activities, while the other side does not enjoy
this
 activity,
as a result
, they bring the military to deal with each other.
Thus
, interference in other
countries
' zones can be used as a reason to start the war.
Secondly
, if one
country
 let others research and interfere in its political activities,
this
 will make its information and data dangerous because other
countries
 can use
this
 as a hole which by knowing
this
 can ruin that
country
's economy.
For example
,
country
 A is selling oil to Europe and it is its major money resource, while if
country
 B interferes in
country
 A affairs can find how much is the price for that product and starts to negotiate with Europeans for a better price,
as a result
,
this
 can hurt
country
 's economy. To conclude, groups of people believe that each
country
 should only be informed and do actions for itself, not interfere with the other
countries
 and I believe
this
 is the right form.
Submitted by mariyanice001 on

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