Your friend is celebrating her Birthday soon and has invited you to a party. But you are unable to come because you are going to attend an important meeting that day. Write a letter to your friend and thank her for the invitation; explain why you cannot come; propose to meet on other day;

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Dear Vaishali, How are you? I got your letter yesterday, Thank you very much for inviting me to your

birthday

party but, unfortunately, I wouldn'

be able to come. I am really sorry for that. I am feeling downhearted that, I wouldn'

be able to attend your

birthday

party as I have to attend a very important meeting at my office. I am the main team leader of

this

project and it is crucial to be present during the presentation.

Moreover

This

project will be a ladder to my career as I am hoping to get a promotion

month. I hope you would understand my situation. I don'

want to miss celebrating your

birthday

so I want to make up for you. How about we go out to celebrate your

birthday

the

day? We could go to barbeque nation for a nice dinner and to the lakeshore after that for a walk. Please don'

say no, it would be so much fun. Waiting for your

letter. Lots of love, Disha

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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