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In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

#people #businesses #work
Nowadays, people tend to apply for
working
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 in a big
company
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companies
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especially
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 the ones which do international business,
however
, most of
old
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the old
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 generation worked in small companies
in
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 decades. There are many different situations in between. In my opinion, I believe it is good to
work
 in a big
company
 at
first
. When students have just finished school, it is better to learn many new things at
beginning
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.
In other words
, when I did an internship in the hospital, I did not know so
many
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 specific knowledge
in
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 each department in a big hospital. There were many details in each task, and I had to study lots of background knowledge by myself. I believe that was a benefit for my career. If I did not have those
experience
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, I would not know how interesting my
work
 was, and continue studying on my way to
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 my skills.
However
, there were
also
 many negative,
for example
, working in a big department was hard to deal with
gossips
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for
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from
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bunch
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a bunch
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 of groups in
workplace
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the workplace
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. It was difficult to get to know
the
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 colleague and find supportive friends. In the contrast, working in a small
company
 is easy to find someone to help and build
good
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a good
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relationship
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relationships
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between
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 coworkers. Everyone helps each other to finish the tasks together and
hand
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out
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 after
work
for
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 releasing and sharing experience
to
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with
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 the young staff.
In addition
, the atmosphere is better than working in
big
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a big
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company
.
However
, even though it is good to share the tips with others, it is still hard to understand many complicated cases because there are rare samples
show
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 in
show
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 department. In conclusion, I understand there are many benefits to
work
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 in
small
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a small
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company
, which make workers get
strong
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a strong
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connection
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connections
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.
However
, I still believe people can get more experience when
work
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 in big companies, it can be
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a challenge
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challenge
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 at
first
, but
at
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in
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 the end, they get more benefits
afterward
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afterwards
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.
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