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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling in these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles will outweigh the disadvantages?

#future #cars #buses #trucks #driverless #people #vehicles #passengers
The advancements in Technology brought
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significant change throughout the world. Most of the automobile industries successfully invented
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driverless cars and
busses
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 over the
last
 decade, which may even develop
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 automatic-driven
vehicles
 in the upcoming years. In the forthcoming paragraph,
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 will discuss the advantages and
dis-advantages
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 of
this
 development.
Firstly
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Automation can help to reduce the number of crashes on the road.
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 Transport department, identifies driver behaviour or error
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 a factor in 94% of
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road accidents and these
vehicles
 reduced the error to a significant level. These self-driven
vehicles
 have easy access to google maps, which not only reduces
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traffic congestion
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 but
also
 helps us to avoid traffic routes which
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travel time and fuel consumption. All these improvements
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 in a major cost reduction
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 the companies.
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the
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self-driven
vehicles
 which
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 the
drivers
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 involvement can
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the un-employment
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 of the drivers.
Furthermore
, in some cases due to connectivity issues and
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places where
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google maps are not
accessable
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accessible
, the
self driven
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vehicles
 faces a lot of errors, which ricks the
passengers
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 life etc.
Addictionally
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Additionally
, One of the major potential cons of the
self driven
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vehicles
 is the possibility of hacking. The automated cars talks and
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 with each other, they would need to share the same network
protocall
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protocol
. if a large number of cars are in the same network, even a small hack could wreak the significant
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 on the roads.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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