Some people say that increasing businesses and cultural contacts between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
In the modern era ,
people
can make a bond with other country masses
with the help of phones . Few individuals think that inclining businesses and cultural contacts between nations
is a positive growth , however
others are against Add a comma
,however
this
notion . I totally agree with formal views and will discuss both views along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
, with a formal statement . First
and foremost reason is Correct article usage
The first
people
get more knowledge
about new products and those have good value in any kind of work with the help of countries
can be able to gain more profit in future years or they can set a new targets
for more gaining . Correct the article-noun agreement
new targets
a new target
For example
, in the year , 2015 a survey was conducted by UNO which was indicating 70% of companies grow their new target by increasing contacts with other nations
. Moreover
, with the help of cultural contact with other nations
Add a comma
,nations
people
are getting more knowledge
about other cultures which help them learn new things from other nation
and it Fix the agreement mistake
nations
also
stops an
idea of hating Correct article usage
the
for
others as well as Change preposition
apply
it
maintains good relations with other Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
.
On the other hand
, with the latter view . Individuals are against upper paragraph views because they think when they start contacting
with other cultural Replace the word
contact
masses
then
maybe they start following other nations
cultural values and it will Change noun form
nations'
nation's
also
impact other masses
so with it how other countries
become more multicultural. For instance
, in the year, 2010 when people
began the use social media they got more knowledge
about other cultures of nation
so with it they changed their lifestyles. In my point of view, when Add an article
the nation
a nation
countries
start good relations in any business field then
they can set up new brands for other nation
which will help to incline national income and many masses
can get jobs under the new companies so the unemployment problem start goes
down .
In conclusion, good bonds are always creat by talking it is a fact so if Wrong verb form
going
masses
talk to other Correct article usage
the masses
nation
it will grow the Fix the agreement mistake
nations
knowledge
of lifestyle or they can get good manners , but without losing their own cultural values .Submitted by gurkiratbadesha36 on
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