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University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

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The given pie charts give information about the differences
regarding
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 how UK citizens spent their
money
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 on 7 different sectors over the period of 30 years, starting from 1971. Overall, it can be obviously seen that there was an increase in the percentage of spending on
cars
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 and computers, while the opposite trend was seen in food and books.
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, the year 1971 witnessed the highest proportion of
money
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 spent on food, whereas
cars
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 were what people spent most of their
money
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 on in 2001. In 1971, people living in the UK used 44% of their total
money
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 to buy food,
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 figure decreased dramatically by 30 % in 2001. A similar trend was seen in books. People had a tendency to spend less on these items, with 6% and 1% in 1971 and 2001 respectively. The expenditure on furniture and petrol almost stayed unchanged throughout the period, around 9%. In 2001,With the development of technology, most of their
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 went to technological devices, namely
cars
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 and computers.
Cars
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 accounted for 22% of the gross amount of
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 in 1971, which was 2 times lower than the percentage of these 3 decades later.The figure for computers spent by Uk residents rocketed from only 2% in 1971 to more than a fifth in 2001. Restaurants
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 saw an upward trend in spending, which was 7% in 1971 and 14% at the end of the period.
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