Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do ou agree or disagree with this statement ?
Education
has evolved much since the Use synonyms
last
few decades.Currently,more practical and useful aspects are being inculcated,rather than old folklore and other theoretical things like that.I mostly agree,with the idea that financial Linking Words
education
should be made compulsory because it makes them financially wise and prevent them from being spendthrift.While it could Use synonyms
also
result in a materialist approach to the personality.
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Firstly
,financial wisdom is achieved by studying how the economy works.Usually,the reason for bankruptcy is being unable to manage and predict the economical ups and down.Oppositely,those who understand the system do away with Linking Words
such
conditions.To illustrate,successful businessmen give birth to other successful ones,and the main contributing factor is learning at home in Linking Words
this
case.Linking Words
Thus
,imparting Linking Words
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education
is imperative in giving rise to financially wise human beings.
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, a lack of Linking Words
knowledge
about the economy is one of the major causes of senseless spending.Use synonyms
For instance
,on the one hand,we usually observe business tycoons in their simple Linking Words
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t-shirts
On the other hand
,our average citizens want to own the most expensive branded clothing,that they could not even afford.The factor here at play is a lack of financial sense.Linking Words
Hence
,economical Linking Words
knowledge
is essential to generate common spending sense in the public.
Contrarily,Use synonyms
education
about how money worksUse synonyms
,
may lead to a generation that values things over humans.It is a common observation that Remove the comma
apply
such
type of Linking Words
knowledge
produces a materialistic approach and people tend to value money more over their relations.Use synonyms
For instance
,a big portion of people from the rich population are misers and according to several psychological surveys,indulging in financial Linking Words
knowledge
is the cause.Use synonyms
Therefore
, behaviours of loving things more than peopleLinking Words
,
may be caused due to economical Remove the comma
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education
.
To conclude, understanding how the financial system of the world works,may give rise to a materialistic approach.Use synonyms
Nonetheless
,I think it should be considered a small price to pay for an economically sound and wise generation.Linking Words
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