Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages of visiting this area?

Nowadays, there are

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number of visitors in areas with

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sky

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for instance

the Sahara desert of the Antarctic. I will cover

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and drawbacks of

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Firstly

, there are several advantages to visiting

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places. Natural beauty and peaceful scenery can

visiting

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many visitors and in

this

place

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tourist spots are crowded to

maximum

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and full of tourists.

Second

, people can experience a different scene when they reach

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destination.

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, humans who climb famous mountains may experience compatibility. On the other side of the matter, there are several disadvantages of

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the journey

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to

such

places. I would like to point out that some humans can be very upset when seeking medical attention

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away.

In addition

to the disadvantages, a certain benefit is the curiosity of people visitors are very curious by nature and they are

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for a once in a lifetime experience. There is no doubt that everyone wants to see something out of the ordinary.

In particular

, they can go to Antarctica to see mountains or penguins. A possible

drawbacks

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is health problems after visiting

this

site. Humans need to be in great physical condition to survive in bad weather conditions,

event

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though it can be harmful

for

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healthy while

journey

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.

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, a person can catch a cold, and

this

can be the

first

cause of lungs problem. In conclusion, I would like to conclude that

traveling

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is good, but before

traveling

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, we need to take care of our health.