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News / Media has an influence on our life and some people think it can have a negative effect. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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From FM Radio to the Newspaper and TV to social
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 we consume data every day.
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 consumption affects our thought process in a voluntary or involuntarily manner which might alter the perception of any new information we receive. Referencing the works of George Orwell, it was Big Brother - a central authority in London who controlled his countrymen through tight control of the
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. Before commencement of the World War 2, Hiter had controlled the narrative of his agenda through print and visual
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. Over the years
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 and
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 has been evolved into digital
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 which we gather from either home-held televisions or smartphones. With ,touch we can access millions of terabytes of information on the go. Earlier
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companies
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 like New York Times, Washington Journal etc. were independent, bold and readers centric.
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 is because of the subscription model package through which these
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 attract more
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 readers.
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, due to the fierce competition, these
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 focussed more on editorials, quality
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 reporting and investigations for their new content in their journals.
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 all changed after the commencement of the digital age. People started focussing more on aesthetics rather than any novelty in
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 or
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 which led to the recruitment of designers rather than reporters. Fueled with mushrooms of small outlets opening their own
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 channels, they provided
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 to users with cheap plans or sometimes made their content free of cost.
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 cost these old
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companies
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 huge losses and most of them got sold to larger corporations like E-giants Amazon and Facebook.
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 is troublesome, as in the past we had known that big powers like the government or large private entities had meddled in these sectors for their propaganda or to change the public perception. Once NYT had reported against Amazon for improper employee management and times in their supply chain department. Now, after the hostile takeover of NYT by Amazon, we don't see any investigative articles from the
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 company. Their monopoly in each and every sector of the market and especially in the
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 and
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 sector is frightening.
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 /
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 has an influence on our life and it can have a negative effect.
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