Write about the following topic: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the fast pace of industrialization, most
countries
cannot develop like rich
countries
due to various economic issues.
Although
developed
nations
providing
money
does not solve the poverty issues in non-developed
countries
because
money
in those
countries
does not have value,
instead
growing
nations
should provide other subsidies. I agree with the statement mentioned above and the following essay will elaborate
further
with examples. Commencing, it is true that today developing
countries
and non-developed
countries
are unable to overcome the poverty issue, and providing
money
for these
countries
means they do not have value since the
money
provided for
nations
is not enough to solve the issues.
Thus
, rich
countries
should
support
poor
nations
with things that boost their economy.
Additionally
, providing essential resources to improve the health, and education sectors. As an example, there is a rural region in developing
countries
where children are unable to access luxury education systems and they don’t have technological advancements in their learning.
Moreover
,
people
have to travel miles to consult a doctor for their sickness and these
nations
are not capable of building dispensary units in each region.
On the other hand
, the most essential requirement today in poor
countries
is unable to build up in homes. A plethora of individuals
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
living in streets and shady places where they don’t have enough
support
from the government to build their own houses. As an example, in India, one-
third
of the nation's population is living on pavements and some
people
have families where children grow up in these places. Furthermost, if developed
countries
provide
support
for
countries
in providing shelters for
people
it would be much more beneficial for
people
rather than lending
money
. In conclusion, I agree that rich
countries
can help poor
countries
to develop in many ways
such
as by providing
support
in the education system, and health, and by building up homes for the needy.
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