Write about the following topic: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the fast pace of industrialization, most
countries
cannot develop like rich countries
due to various economic issues. Although
developed nations
providing money
does not solve the poverty issues in non-developed countries
because money
in those countries
does not have value, instead
growing nations
should provide other subsidies. I agree with the statement mentioned above and the following essay will elaborate further
with examples.
Commencing, it is true that today developing countries
and non-developed countries
are unable to overcome the poverty issue, and providing money
for these countries
means they do not have value since the money
provided for nations
is not enough to solve the issues. Thus
, rich countries
should support
poor nations
with things that boost their economy. Additionally
, providing essential resources to improve the health, and education sectors. As an example, there is a rural region in developing countries
where children are unable to access luxury education systems and they don’t have technological advancements in their learning. Moreover
, people
have to travel miles to consult a doctor for their sickness and these nations
are not capable of building dispensary units in each region.
On the other hand
, the most essential requirement today in poor countries
is unable to build up in homes. A plethora of individuals is
living in streets and shady places where they don’t have enough Change the verb form
are
support
from the government to build their own houses. As an example, in India, one-third
of the nation's population is living on pavements and some people
have families where children grow up in these places. Furthermost, if developed countries
provide support
for countries
in providing shelters for people
it would be much more beneficial for people
rather than lending money
.
In conclusion, I agree that rich countries
can help poor countries
to develop in many ways such
as by providing support
in the education system, and health, and by building up homes for the needy.Submitted by wathsala.lekamge1997 on
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