some people believed that government should make sure to make people to go on a diet. while others believe that the individuals need to take care of their own diet and health. discuss both views and give your opinion

Population
fitness is one of the authority's responsibilities,
hence
many argue that the authority should enforce their
population
to
do
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a healthy
diet
.
However
, many contradict
this
idea and believe fitness is individual responsibility. In my personal opinion, going on a
diet
is individual
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and
people
should have choices on how to do it. Governments are responsible to ensure the basic
rights
of their
people
, including
health
. With the increasing number of metabolic diseases,
such
as diabetes and stroke, it is reasonable for the government to prevent mortality and morbidity by enforcing their citizens to go on a
diet
and take care of their
health
.
This
can be done by routine
health
status monitoring in the appointed local clinic, and if the results of the tests are unsatisfactory, the government may give them several
health
regimens to follow
such
as a strict
diet
and rigorous exercise.
This
direct intervention is helpful to prevent the number of metabolic diseases
hence
increasing the level of
population
health
.
However
, I believe that society should take care of their own well-being since
although
health
is basic human
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, the way of being healthy is a personal choice. There are various approaches to gaining
health
and
this
may be different among
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population
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, based on their needs and preferences.
For instance
, many lactose intolerant
people
opt to be pescatarians because they can not process lactose or meat, but they are still healthy though their
diet
choice is uncommon. The authority
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the responsibility to ensure that their society is healthy, but it does not mean that they have the freedom to control their citizen's life
choice
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.
Health
is a personal matter and the one who truly understands what they need is the person itself.
Hence
, the public should take good care of their well-being. In conclusion, even though
government
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are responsible for its
people
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health
, they have no
rights
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to interfere with the life choices of its
people
, as
health
is a personal matter and individualized.
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