Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The graph illustrates the average amount of carbon dioxide in metric
tonnes
for each individual in four European countries over a forty-year period. Overall, the UK and Sweden, which
initially
showed a high C02 output, saw a decline in emissions toward the end of the period. In comparison, Italy and Portugal, which started with relatively low emissions, saw considerable increases by the end of the period. In 1967, the highest proportion of carbon emissions was registered in the UK at around 11 metric
tonnes
per capita,
however
,
this
figure declined steadily ending at approximately 9 metric
tonnes
for each individual by 2007. Sweden's output started at just over 8 metric
tonnes
, rising to a peak of slightly more than 10
tonnes
in 1977, it
then
indicated a sharp decline to approximately half of that by 2007.
Conversely
, Portugal in 1967 had the lowest level at just over 1 metric tonne per person. Over the
next
four
decades
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this
increased sharply, ending at over 5 metric
tonnes
. Italy demonstrated a similar pattern, beginning at a little over 4 metric
tonnes
and ending at nearly 8
tonnes
of carbon dioxide for each person by 2007.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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