Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantges?

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was always debatable and has now become more controversial. Numerous types of reasons behind that. In my, opinion it is beneficial for
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cultural and traditional ways. But, might be disappointing because of jobs opportunity,
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and, new knowledge about
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world. In
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and negative effects of
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argument but the most preponderant fact is that it is pivotal to improve your own heritage culture. Another pivotal aspect is that most of the population shifted quickly to grab
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another cities
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as London, Newyork, and, Delhi to fulfil
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. But fewer think about their
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and living in the
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where they
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. In, addition the survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that the
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is very close to heart and most of the pupils not moving
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they have good work opportunities and they
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like the hustling and bustling of the destination and big cities are hazardous and adore pristine nature of hometowns.
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, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
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issue. Though, the bullet point is that living in
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new country or region which is open countless gates of terrible sides .
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, expenses, costly apartments,
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cuisines are paramount factor which is
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by the new individual. Moving
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, it is pertinent to mention that the article published in the eminent newspaper the Hindustan Times depicts that the pollution of the big metropolis city
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spread
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chronic diseases
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tumours. In conclusion, according to the information aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the perks of
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institute indeed.
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,
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potential drawbacks of
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area
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should not be overlooked either.
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