Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many
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enjoy following celebrities'
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closely. They imagine that they know the celebrity and comment about his/her
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meanly. Many
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think being famous means
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can talk about them anytime they want.
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, I believe any person deserves a private
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. Most
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forget that famous
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are
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humans. The main differences between famous and regular
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are, famous
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are mostly richer and more
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know them.
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, a celebrity is just a human being and they have feelings just like
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. I believe the media behave them unfairly.
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, when a woman gains weight, they published a picture that they didn'
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permission for and write something about her weight.
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, Adriana Lima is a gorgeous super-model and after she gave birth, many media sources mention how fat she is and most men agree with it. Famous
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don'
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owe society anything
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as beauty, happiness or a perfect lifestyle. They could become fatter, uglier or depressed but in any condition,
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shouldn'
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behave them disrespectfully.
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, they don'
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have to share any detail from their
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. Angele mentioned in her documentary before she opened her sexual situation, a paparazzi had published her and her girlfriend and it was hard for her family. In the contrast, some
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don'
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have a problem using someone's special
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because fame causes
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. Even they could use their special lives to become more popular than ever. Reality shows or some programs show society their private
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. Some of them cry or tell a sad story from their past to
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and create attention to themselves. Many
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like watching these kinds of
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, these are mostly not even real. To sum up, there are different ideas about celebrities' privacy. While some
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's media behave unfairly,
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don'
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see a problem to watch a person's private
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. I believe they are not very different from any other human and they deserve privacy just like
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