A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. - Describe your point of view. - Say what you like about the show and why. - Ask the newspaper to take some action. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am contacting you regarding a recent article where you unfairly criticized one of the

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shows CID on Sony TV. It is understandable that CID is not everyone's cup of tea but, that doesn't make a reason to complain and lambasting the author and display it publicly. I personally feel that ,unlike other TV shows that are more inclined towards unrealistic politics, entertainment and sexual content,

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show is based on the true crime of India. And being fascinated by Action and Crime stories I strongly reprimand your article for

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public criticism that can affect the TRP for the show. To rectify

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action it would be grateful if the newspaper can publish another apologetic article to the channel and the director of the show. In future please refrain from any negative publishing or comments. Yours faithfully, XXXXX.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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