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A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. - Describe your point of view. - Say what you like about the show and why. - Ask the newspaper to take some action. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am contacting you regarding a recent article where you unfairly criticized one of the
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 shows CID on Sony TV. It is understandable that CID is not everyone's cup of tea but, that doesn't make a reason to complain and lambasting the author and display it publicly. I personally feel that ,unlike other TV shows that are more inclined towards unrealistic politics, entertainment and sexual content,
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 show is based on the true crime of India. And being fascinated by Action and Crime stories I strongly reprimand your article for
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 public criticism that can affect the TRP for the show. To rectify
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 action it would be grateful if the newspaper can publish another apologetic article to the channel and the director of the show. In future please refrain from any negative publishing or comments. Yours faithfully, XXXXX.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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