Many believe that to be successful in a particular sport, having a natural ability is more important than training and hardwork. Discuss both views n give your opinion.

Numerous individuals claim that natural
ability
plays a vital role in sports rather than training and hard work. Perhaps natural
ability
gives us perks of technique. Yet, practice makes everything perfect. In my, opinion the position of practising and
ability
which have gained naturally appears to be more rational. In
this
, essay we will
further
elaborate on the positive and negative impact of both approaches and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.
However
, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments. But the most preponderant fact is that we did not rely on a single particular skill in the sport because the games playing around the world and it is
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the pride of the nation. Another pivotal aspect is that countless strategies
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in games
such
as leadership, time management, and, unity. the natural eligibility did not help in
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achieving goals. In, addition the survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that players who have only natural
ability
did not beat the
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persons who
practices
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and
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so much.
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,
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myriads
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of benefits
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notion.
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first
and foremost is that these kinds of
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are paramount in the sports culture. Another striking benefit of
this
regard is that it is enhancing
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brain and physical skills
such
as
decision making
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, and, how to pretend cool in various situations. Moving
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it is pertinent to mention that the article published in the eminent newspaper depicts that
hardwork
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hard work
and
practices
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are modified
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into
greatest
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playera
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players
player
. For, example Sachin Tendulkar, and, Ricky
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are
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a player who
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minute
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natural
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.
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, they
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too much and
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the goal. According to the argument aforementioned above
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can reach the conclusion that the perks of hard work are instrumental indeed.
Nevertheless
, its potential drawbacks of natural
ability
should be overlooked either.
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