Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your won opinion.
People have different views about who plays a more important role for
children
in becoming proper participants in society. While some people agree that schools are responsible for it, I believe that its accomplishment needs both Use synonyms
parents
and teachers.
It is no doubt that Use synonyms
children
are influenced by their parent's personality traits, particularly their conduct because Use synonyms
parents
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children
's teachers before they are educated. There are few social activities until they start school, even with their little older friends. The majority of Use synonyms
students
spend plenty of time on their grades rather than on interpersonal skills Use synonyms
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as communication, listening, and handling conflicts. Linking Words
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parents
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children
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On the other hand
, I can understand the arguments supporting the liability of schools for teaching. The reason for Linking Words
this
view is that school is a micro-society for Linking Words
children
, and teachers should manage and guide them to become better, not just study hard. Use synonyms
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students
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parents
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students
to judge whether their behaviour is correct and should be forgiven after an apology. The teacher has no favoured for his or her Use synonyms
students
, and protecting their child is the parent's instinct.
To summarize, there are many reasons why school should help Use synonyms
children
become better members of society, but in my opinion, it will accomplish more with less if Use synonyms
children
are guided on their own time by their guardians.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite