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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, some people still argued that volunteer work should be mandatory
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 teenagers who study at school or university
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 because it will be useful to society. In my opinion,I completely disagree with
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 both statements will be discussed and given some reasons to support my opinion. I think that the addition of mandatory public works has some disadvantages.
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 result students will not have enough time
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 homework.
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 down.They can
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 motivation to take part in voluntary activities
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 or training kids.
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, if students spend a lot of time on
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 extracurricular activities and their academic performance decreases, they will try to avoid them.
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 it will improve their social skills
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 knowledge about global problems.
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young minds will be able to find a solution to any problem of humanity.
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 a better future. In conclusion, including social service
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 the training program will bring advantages to the younger generation and improve their practical knowledge.
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 students should be given the freedom of choice; due to
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 volunteer work would be useful if children truly want to be a part of it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • high school programmes
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • improving the neighbourhood
  • teaching sports
  • sense of responsibility
  • empathy
  • broader perspective
  • societal issues
  • college applications
  • job applications
  • positive impact
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