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building they live in.Other people are not interested in it saying it's boring Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In some nations, a number of people are willing to know about the initial lifestyle of the society who used to live in today’s
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 and
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instructors
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 while some people are showing negative action about learning the history of
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. In my opinion,
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 able to
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 more about the place where we live can be advantageous while knowing the importance of the ancient culture.
This
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 rate of humans who are trying to find out what
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looked like in the past where they live now is increasing. The
background
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 of ancient buildings often presents an old lifestyle of humans who used to live in
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times when
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technology has not
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 yet.
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, exploring the
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 reveals some unique
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 about
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.
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, it was a vital project for
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archaeology
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 were constructed in the past and by learning
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houses
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 they were able to learn a number of unique facts.
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, some people believe that exploring
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 to find out the history of
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 where they live is not necessary and
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 boring since nowadays we are living in a world
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 technologies are well developed
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 it much easier to learn everything, particularly about the
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 of old and ancient
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 through the internet by the aid of social media platforms. Taking Google as an example, which is considered one of the biggest
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 of digital data creates a number of opportunities for individuals to find out about the ancient
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 of
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 without much effort and
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also
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 utilized by thousands of
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archaeology
 as
an
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 contributing factor. To conclude, having weighed everything mentioned up, I can come to the conclusion
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that, by exploring ancient
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 humans will be able to spend
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their
 time more effectively rather than searching for information through the internet.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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