Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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The
sky
is the appearance of the atmosphere around the surface of the planet from our point of view. We see many objects that are actually in space
such
as the Sun, the Moon, and stars because they are in the
sky
. On a clear
day
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the
sky
appears blue. At night it appears from very dark blue to black. The deepness of the blue increases as we look toward the horizon, and up to the point above us. The
sky
, which is made up of gas molecules, is blue because of the random scattering of sunlight by the molecules. Rayleigh scattering defines the amount of scattering of light rays. Blue light scatters much more than red, which is why the
sky
appears blue on a clear day. Depending on the time of day, the
sky
may appear
different
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colors
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. At dawn or
dusk
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the
sky
may appear red, orange, or even green and purple depending on how low the sun is and how close it is
to night
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. Other planets have skies too. Because the types of gases in their atmospheres are different, they have different
sky
colors
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.
For example
, the
sky
on Mars is red.[1] Many things can be seen in the
sky
. There are objects from space like the Sun, Moon, and stars. There are
also
many weather events seen in the
sky
.
For example
, these can be clouds, rain, lightning, or fog. Weather is caused by different patterns and temperatures in the atmosphere. Other things that can be seen in the
sky
are birds, other flying animals, and aircraft.
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  • regulatory framework
  • personal autonomy
  • informed consent
  • risk mitigation strategies
  • thrill-seeking behavior
  • protective gear
  • extreme athleticism
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