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many people believe that countries should produce food to all people of the country and ipmort as little as can. do you agree or disagree.

#people #countries #food #country #ipmort
There are many theories which promote an
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 state management based on self-satisfaction
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 needs and low
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 of imports. It is an open debate nowadays because every government has to decide how to apply its power. These ideas named "self-sufficient", have the purpose to become
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 and reduce as soon as possible bonds with other countries. The main advantage is the lower level of needs and addiction from other states and the less influence of global crisis.
Moreover
, reduced imports cause a huge increase
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internal demand, which stimulates and increase the national supply. A clear example of
this
 statement is the
first
 important crisis of 1929 when the main governments in the world were connected by the so-called "gold standard" and it caused the world decline.
Otherwise
, during the world
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 every alliance started to trade and produce only within their borders as a strategy to win the conflict.
However
, there are other states which prefer to share their materials with others.
This
 theory helps every place to sell its extra production and buy where there is a lack of commodities. Governments which choose
this
 economic plan
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 a financial upgrade and build up
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equal wealth among citizens. The European
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 is a living witness
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this
 behaviour. In conclusion, I think that countries should develop a foreign economy based on
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 and financial support
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 because every nation has its lacks
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power points.
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 the self-sufficient method created many breaks in terms of chemistry between states or alliances.
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