many people spoil natural beauties like sea ,beaches ,mountains and lakes .do people responsible for that ?what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty ?give the reasons and examples for your answer.

in
this
era,
exploitation
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the exploitation
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nature
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of nature
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is one of the most dangerous activities that do by
sompe
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some
people
. they take
resources
in
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from
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the
land
(
such
as mountains and forests) and in the water (
such
as beaches and lakes) without
think
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thinking
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about sustainability. today, we need
a
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the
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policy to stop
this
activity. it is true that our world has rich
resources
from
nature
.
for example
, as a tropical country, Indonesia is diversity country
from
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in
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any
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many
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sectors
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sector
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.
moreover
,
indonesia
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Indonesia
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has many tropical forests. unfortunately,
this
diversity did not
use
wisely by the minority especially the
pople
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people
that leave in near
ther
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the
forest.
furthermore
, they do deforestation year by year. in
this
case,
get
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income is the purpose
from
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of
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this
activity. as the result,
nature
was destroyed
in
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everywhere and
cause
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caused
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of
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global warming. by
this
situation, the
government
must give
a
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the
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policy to
use
resources
. for the
people
who destroy it must give the country a big
compentation
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compensation
competition
for not doing it again.
besides
that, the
government
must
education
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educate
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the community to not destroy our
envitonment
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environment
. in general, the community did not know
ho
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how
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to
use
the
resources
wisely. by
this
policy, we hope can stop
this
danger
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dangerous
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activiry
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activity
. in
addtion
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addition
, if there some areas were destroyed,
for
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people
who do it must fix these areas.
for example
, after mining a forest, the company must do reclamation for
this
land
. so the
land
will be
a
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green
land
in the future. in conclusion,
destroyed
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destroying
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land
because of some
people
must be done together,
epecially
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especially
by the
government
. the
government
will make
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a regulation
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regulation
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regulations
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that can guide how to
use
the
resources
wisely and how to protect our
nature
together.
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