many people spoil natural beauties like sea ,beaches ,mountains and lakes .do people responsible for that ?what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty ?give the reasons and examples for your answer.
in
this
era, exploitation
Correct article usage
the exploitation
nature
is one of the most dangerous activities that do by Change preposition
of nature
sompe
Correct your spelling
some
people
. they take resources
in
the Change preposition
from
land
(such
as mountains and forests) and in the water (such
as beaches and lakes) without think
about sustainability. today, we need Change the verb form
thinking
a
policy to stop Change the article
the
this
activity.
it is true that our world has rich resources
from nature
. for example
, as a tropical country, Indonesia is diversity country from
Change preposition
in
any
Correct your spelling
many
sectors
. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
moreover
, indonesia
has many tropical forests. unfortunately, Change the capitalization
Indonesia
this
diversity did not use
wisely by the minority especially the pople
that leave in near Correct your spelling
people
ther
forest. Correct your spelling
the
furthermore
, they do deforestation year by year. in this
case, get
income is the purpose Wrong verb form
getting
from
Change preposition
of
this
activity. as the result, nature
was destroyed in
everywhere and Change preposition
apply
cause
Wrong verb form
caused
of
global warming.
by Change preposition
apply
this
situation, the government
must give a
policy to Change the article
the
use
resources
. for the people
who destroy it must give the country a big compentation
for not doing it again. Correct your spelling
compensation
competition
besides
that, the government
must education
the community to not destroy our Replace the word
educate
envitonment
. in general, the community did not know Correct your spelling
environment
ho
to Correct your spelling
how
use
the resources
wisely. by this
policy, we hope can stop this
danger
Replace the word
dangerous
activiry
. in Correct your spelling
activity
addtion
, if there some areas were destroyed, Correct your spelling
addition
for
Change preposition
apply
people
who do it must fix these areas. for example
, after mining a forest, the company must do reclamation for this
land
. so the land
will be a
green Correct article usage
apply
land
in the future.
in conclusion, destroyed
Wrong verb form
destroying
land
because of some people
must be done together, epecially
by the Correct your spelling
especially
government
. the government
will make Add an article
a regulation
regulation
that can guide how to Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
use
the resources
wisely and how to protect our nature
together.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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