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You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the opportunity to shop in the shopping center has cheap second-hand furniture. Write to the shop owner describing what you need and asking whether they have these items and what they cost.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you request information on your
company
's products. I have just rented a flat
that is
 unfurnished. So I decided to buy some kind of furniture. I heard about your
company
 from my close friend. Because I do not know about
this
 city, I am a newcomer. Does your
company
 have a sofa, an
arm-chairand
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arm-chair and
 a closet?I need these
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
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. In my new flat, there is no sofa. I want the sofa to be in my apartment to watch a film. Another thing I want to purchase is that chair. In my new
living-room
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living room
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, there is one table. But there
is
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are
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 not enough chairs to greet guests. I would like to buy these furnishings from your
company
to
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for
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 my new apartment and I would like to know what you cost
these
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for these
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 items. I will be very happy if you have these
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
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. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, RASHIDOVA S S Rashidova
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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