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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter: – tell them about your situation – explain how this is affecting you – request a new card

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Dear Sir Joseph, I am a student I study at one of the most popular universities in the world it is Oxford University. I am writing my request letter to the university director about finding a solution to my problem.
Firstly
, these days
this
 problem takes me an extensive period of time. I am going to tell you about my identification
card
.
This
 is immensely essential to me because
this
card
 can help me in difficult situations. I know my mistake yet. I strongly believe that you can help me.
This
card
 affected my study-related problems.
Furthermore
, if I do not find a
card
 my teacher told me about delete in the university. These days I do not go to study and
for
this
 reason, I need help. My classmates told me about the solution to the problem. You possess
a
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 computer which can to invented by all means and only a person can the mistakes I hope you will help me and your help without charge I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Bobur
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. This helps in logically structuring your thoughts and presenting them in an organized manner.
Coherence & Cohesion
Stick to one idea per paragraph. Start with a sentence introducing the idea, followed by sentences that add more detail. This will make your writing easier to follow.
Task Achievement
Address all parts of the task. Make sure to tell the director about your situation, explain how this is affecting you, and request a new card clearly and directly.
Task Achievement
Use a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter. Remember that you are writing to a university official, so the tone should be formal and respectful.
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