If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition. What would you choose? Why? use specific reasons and details to explore your choice.
The cultural and heritages
things
is to identify nation's history but in our country have so many unique things to represent an international exhibition.Fix the agreement mistake
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would like to explain these things in upcoming paragraphs.
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To begin
with, paintings
are unique in south india
especially, the peculiar art and stories behind Change the capitalization
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in
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tanjore
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Tanjore
paintings
additionally
, it was discovered by southern
side of Add an article
the southern
tamilnadu
.These Change the capitalization
Tamilnadu
TamilNadu
paintings
are introduced in the cholas
period and most of the Change the capitalization
Cholas
paintings
drawn
in the temples which Add a missing verb
were drawn
is
mixed with Change the verb form
are
european
style and glittering gold foils overlaid the Change the capitalization
European
paintings
.the subject of most paintings
which
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hindu
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Hindu
god
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gods
moreover
it has unique features compared to the other paintings
such
as vivid color
and class beads,precious stones ,and Change the spelling
colour
guesso
work.
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guess
Moreover
, we can represent the tanjore
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Tanjore
paintings
in an international exhibition as it shows our culture of south india
.Change the capitalization
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in
the painting Change preposition
apply
drawn
by a special paper which is Add a missing verb
is drawn
light weight
with Correct your spelling
lightweight
fragrance
smell and it is pasted on Correct article usage
a fragrance
the
wooden frame, which is Correct article usage
a
teak
tree.these Add an article
a teak
the teak
paintings
are described the maratha
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Maratha
rulers
lifestyle and history after that mineral dyes and natural Change to a genitive case
ruler's
rulers'
colors
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colours
used
in the Add a missing verb
were used
paintings
.Real gold foils in the paintings
shows
unique of other Change the verb form
show
paintings
.For example
, The Shilp Guru award carries tanjore
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Tanjore
paintings
in 2020.
To sum up, after analysing all the above point
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points
paintings
used to explore the history of life stlye
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style
an
international exhibitions used to know and Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
showoff
their culture to everyone.Correct your spelling
show off
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- secondly
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- moreover
- also
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- although
- even though
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