Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines or other products intended for human use. Others, however, criticize this as animal cruelty. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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cruelty
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in
this
modern era, because of performing numerous
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on the creatures. But the inp of
animals
was always debatable and has now become more controversial. many people claim that
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of
animals
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considered
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and others believe that the new medicine and product
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are vital for the illness. The impact of carnal appears to be more rational. In my, opinion
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strongly claim that it has terrible effects on
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wild
animals
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we will
further
elaborate on the position and negative effects of
this
trend and
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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will
further
explain the situation but the preponderant
fact
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scholars need to
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their vaccine on
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animals
because it is
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and affordable strategy. Another striking benefit of
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more paramount rather than humans and DNA and RNA are
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vital because most of the carnival has the same
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DNA
. In, addition the survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed that scientists are utilised the body of
animals
due to the
fact
that experiments and research and it is not appropriate.
However
, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
this
trend. But the most alarming
fact
is that humans are more precious rather than pupils.
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shoot by
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hunters,
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population of
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by
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scholars who are
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research
new media
such
as Cancer, and, Chickenpox. Moving
further
, it is pertinent to mention that the article published by the eminent newspaper the Hindustan Times depicts that
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animals
play important role in the search of new medicine because it has similar RNA and DNA.
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numbers
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as mice
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,
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, and, reptiles have
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impact on
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biodiversity. According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the
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, that the perks of research
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instrumental indeed.
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testing
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drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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